… my XO Fan-Fiction Novelization of The Ravaging.
There’s much to be added, things like description of locations, weapons, and motivations, but I’m not sure just what.
Things need explaining but I’m having trouble figuring out exactly what to explain.
I’m looking for someone who wants to and can point out the plot holes and missing descriptors.
I can’t upload the PDF here, so, I will need your email to send it to you. Don’t leave that email in a comment on this thread. Privately DM it to me.
Thanks in advance!